Thread by Taylin John Simmonds
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- Apr 6, 2023
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3 persuasive hook writing hacks I learned from the lead writer at ESPN (with 15 years experience):
Hook modifiers crank your ‘go viral’ meter up to 10.
They increase the perceived value of your writing.
Imagine you're buying a new car and the dealership throws in heated seats for free.
We're gonna do the same to your writing with these 3 modifiers...
They increase the perceived value of your writing.
Imagine you're buying a new car and the dealership throws in heated seats for free.
We're gonna do the same to your writing with these 3 modifiers...
The “what is that?” modifier
Purpose - add a new twist to a relevant problem.
Framework - known + unknown
Known = How to come up with writing ideas
Unknown = Infinite turtles technique
Make it relevant. Then make it elegant.
Purpose - add a new twist to a relevant problem.
Framework - known + unknown
Known = How to come up with writing ideas
Unknown = Infinite turtles technique
Make it relevant. Then make it elegant.
The “I want it now” modifier
Aka. The quickie
Purpose - shorten the time horizon for your readers desired result.
❌ I’ll get you jacked in 12 months.
✅ I’ll get you jacked in 3 months.
Keep it realistic or look like a gimmick.
Aka. The quickie
Purpose - shorten the time horizon for your readers desired result.
❌ I’ll get you jacked in 12 months.
✅ I’ll get you jacked in 3 months.
Keep it realistic or look like a gimmick.
The “I trust you” modifier
Purpose - persuades the reader to care about you.
• Borrow accomplishments
• Elegantly flaunt your accomplishments
• Make your past clients look like heroes
In a zombie apocalypse people trust the guy with the strongest safe house.
Purpose - persuades the reader to care about you.
• Borrow accomplishments
• Elegantly flaunt your accomplishments
• Make your past clients look like heroes
In a zombie apocalypse people trust the guy with the strongest safe house.
If you've made it this far on our hook writing journey, I have a gift for you.
A treasure of sorts.
15 months of hook writing knowledge packed into one simple Notion cheat sheet.
Download it here:
www.notion.so/Viral-Hook-Writing-eaf8d563c70542e29c0ea99bccade3ed?pvs=4
A treasure of sorts.
15 months of hook writing knowledge packed into one simple Notion cheat sheet.
Download it here:
www.notion.so/Viral-Hook-Writing-eaf8d563c70542e29c0ea99bccade3ed?pvs=4
TL/DR
Increase the perceived value of your hooks with modifiers:
• Add social proof to build trust
• Add novelty to trigger dopamine
• Shorten time frames to entice bratty readers
Increase the perceived value of your hooks with modifiers:
• Add social proof to build trust
• Add novelty to trigger dopamine
• Shorten time frames to entice bratty readers
If you’ve made it this far, you must've enjoyed the journey.
So you might as well drop me a follow @taylinsimmonds
And RT the 1st tweet to pimp a friend's hooks.
Until next time,
TS
So you might as well drop me a follow @taylinsimmonds
And RT the 1st tweet to pimp a friend's hooks.
Until next time,
TS